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Sleeping Beauty by =ilfantasista27:iconilfantasista27:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Abstract

©2009 =ilfantasista27
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... might redo it later

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=KaleyAngela Aug 3, 2009, 7:18:25 PM
This is really nice. The lighting, and the facial features. It's all in perfect proportion. The only problem I see, Is her neck. It cuts off a little too soon, and makes it look rather lazy. You could've added the shoulders, and cut them off there, It would make it look much nicer. Also, Her Eyebrow is a little too short. Maybe, It could be just a smidge longer. ;)

That's all I have to say, Keep up the good work! You're improving, as I can see. Somethings need to be fixed, But other than that you're going at an easy pace. <3
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~cougirl94 Aug 1, 2009, 1:39:27 PM
She looks lovely! :aww:

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*Angel2kiss Aug 1, 2009, 1:53:14 PM
Wow, this is REALLY good! :D
I love how the lips and nose came out, they are eye-catching!
Excellent job!
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*ayeshauzmakhan Aug 1, 2009, 2:51:47 PM
Vary good!

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=ilfantasista27 Aug 1, 2009, 3:28:57 PM
thank you! ^^

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=ilfantasista27 Aug 1, 2009, 3:29:11 PM
THANK YOU :hug:

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=ilfantasista27 Aug 1, 2009, 3:29:32 PM
Thank you so much! :D

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~cougirl94 Aug 1, 2009, 3:53:09 PM
You're welcome! :)

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Proverbs 31:30
"Charm is deceptive, and beauty is fleeting, but a woman who fears the Lord is to be praised."
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*~ "No, love is not a fight, but it's something worth fighting for..." ~*
:heart:
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~TheUnicornLord Aug 1, 2009, 5:32:51 PM
Looks awesome!!
I like how you did the lips :nod:

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